Wow!
i love this kinda stuff, but next time maybe you could fit in a girls voice or something? because in like, the last verse.. you could do with that being a girls voice, im not being critical!
P.S im thinking me, im about nine though, and you sound american? but im going in the easter holidays so, yeah. but i sound good on a microphone and i sound about sixteen or seventeen, XD i sound like a crazed fan...